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remixredux09Title: Thrice, Twice, Once More (The Backspin Mix)
Author: n-e-star
Summary: Backspin: A spin that tends to retard, arrest, or reverse the linear motion of an object
Rating: G
Fandom: Doctor Who
Spoilers and/or Warnings: Through season four.
Title, Author and URL of original story: "Once More, With Martians" by the amazing![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
biichan.
He sat on the sofa trying to explain to Sylvia and Wilfred what happened, what he had done, how he had to remove every trace of himself from Donna's memories.
“She was better with you.” Wilfred said.
“I was better with her.” he said softly, more to himself then the other two sitting across from him, before taking a deep breath and continuing. “I just want you to know that there are worlds out there, safe in the sky, because of her. That there are people living in the light, singing songs of Donna Noble, a thousand million light-years away... they will never forget her. While she can never remember.”
Never remember how wonderful she had been.
Never remember everything they did together.
Never remember anywhere they had gone.
Never remember him.
“For one moment... one shining moment... she was the most important woman in the whole wide universe.” He closed his eyes against the pain of losing Donna for the third time in his life.
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“Who is she?” Donna asked and for a brief moment he feels like passing out or throwing up, either way, something very un-Doctor like.
“She's my daughter.”
The face of his other daughter, his real daughter... their daughter, floats before him. Memories of first steps, first words and other milestones wash over him.
“Did you say... daughter?” Donna questions and that prompts yet one more memory.
“I got the coding for the loom done today. We're going to have a daughter.”
His... ah, well... not wife., but companion - yes, companion - swung around to look him in the eye. “Did you say daughter?” she asked.
He nods slowly, “Would you rather it be a boy? I can do that. I'd need to switch a few lines in the midial for...”
Her lips cut off the rest of his ramblings.
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There was a moment on the Ood planet when he thinks Donna knows. When he brushed her mind so she could hear the Ood song he was so preoccupied that for a second he used the pattern that he had used hundreds of times before, the one that let her see him just as much as he could see her.
And later, when the Ood started calling them “Doctor-Donna” and invited them to join the song, he had been swept away by the sheer joy of saving the day once again, “I've sorta got a song of my own, thanks.”
It had been on his lips, that wacky song his first companion made up hundreds of years ago. No time to play, must save the day, around the world and far away. Dah dah dee dee, something about bananas and hats.
“I think your song must end soon.”
Suddenly he remembered where he was, and who he was with. “Meaning?” he asked.
Ood Sigma blinked several times before saying, “Every song must end.”
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When he had first meet her she had said something about having left him back in Ealing a few weeks before. Ealing, Chiswisk, nearly the same neighborhood. Or maybe he had remembered it wrong, it had been nearly nine hundred years ago.
Either way there was her house, with her family inside, just like it had always been.
“I'd better get inside. They'll be worried.” But she didn't move, just stood there – in her wedding dress - looking at him.
“Best Christmas present they could have. Oh, no. I forgot...” he felt the smile that only she could bring out tug at the corners of his mouth “You hate Christmas.”
She smiled back at him and for a moment he felt like he was a boy again. “Yes, I do.”
“Even if it snows?”
She had always loved the snow.
“You could always... well... come with me.” he asked slowly.
“No.”
And just like that he's lost her again. Lost her for the second time.
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“What?!”
It was just too much to take in. He had just – just – lost Rose, now standing here in the TARDIS was a woman in a wedding dress.
“What?!”
A red haired woman in a wedding dress.
“What?!”
The red haired woman who had never put on a wedding dress for him.
“What?!”
---------------------------------------------------
He knew that it would end like this. That one day he would lose her to time.
Time.
He was a Time Lord, he saw everything that was and everything that could be, but he couldn't stop her from growing old.
“I can hear you thinking.” she said softly. “There's nothing you can do. Silly Martian, you may call yourself the Doctor, but you can't fix everything.”
“But what's the fun if I don't try?”
He held her hand and lost her for the first time.
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He had always had a secret longing to visit Earth, now here he was. Japan in the early part of the 21st century. It was everything his boyhood dreams had conjured: cities teaming with neon colored nightlife, countrysides filled with flowers and ancient temples, women dressed in hundred year old garb speaking on cell phones smaller then their hands. History and technology mixed together in a glorious dance.
Then there was the woman.
Obviously a traveler, you didn't get hair that bright or skin that pale in the general genetic makeup of this area of the planet.
“Excuse me,” he said, “but have you ever been a wanderer in the fourth dimension?”
It was a silly question to ask, but there was an air about her that said she had seen things no one else could even guess at.
“Oh,” she looked surprised and for a moment he thought she might just turn away and ignore him. “You’re a Martian too.” she said after studying him “I don’t have some sort of time-energy sticking to me, do I?”
The frankness of the statement made him laugh. “What's your name, young lady?”
“Donna Noble.” She said as the most becoming blush spread over her cheeks.
He bent over her hand, “It's a pleasure to meet you, Donna. I'm the Doctor.”
Author: n-e-star
Summary: Backspin: A spin that tends to retard, arrest, or reverse the linear motion of an object
Rating: G
Fandom: Doctor Who
Spoilers and/or Warnings: Through season four.
Title, Author and URL of original story: "Once More, With Martians" by the amazing
biichan.He sat on the sofa trying to explain to Sylvia and Wilfred what happened, what he had done, how he had to remove every trace of himself from Donna's memories.
“She was better with you.” Wilfred said.
“I was better with her.” he said softly, more to himself then the other two sitting across from him, before taking a deep breath and continuing. “I just want you to know that there are worlds out there, safe in the sky, because of her. That there are people living in the light, singing songs of Donna Noble, a thousand million light-years away... they will never forget her. While she can never remember.”
Never remember how wonderful she had been.
Never remember everything they did together.
Never remember anywhere they had gone.
Never remember him.
“For one moment... one shining moment... she was the most important woman in the whole wide universe.” He closed his eyes against the pain of losing Donna for the third time in his life.
“Who is she?” Donna asked and for a brief moment he feels like passing out or throwing up, either way, something very un-Doctor like.
“She's my daughter.”
The face of his other daughter, his real daughter... their daughter, floats before him. Memories of first steps, first words and other milestones wash over him.
“Did you say... daughter?” Donna questions and that prompts yet one more memory.
“I got the coding for the loom done today. We're going to have a daughter.”
His... ah, well... not wife., but companion - yes, companion - swung around to look him in the eye. “Did you say daughter?” she asked.
He nods slowly, “Would you rather it be a boy? I can do that. I'd need to switch a few lines in the midial for...”
Her lips cut off the rest of his ramblings.
There was a moment on the Ood planet when he thinks Donna knows. When he brushed her mind so she could hear the Ood song he was so preoccupied that for a second he used the pattern that he had used hundreds of times before, the one that let her see him just as much as he could see her.
And later, when the Ood started calling them “Doctor-Donna” and invited them to join the song, he had been swept away by the sheer joy of saving the day once again, “I've sorta got a song of my own, thanks.”
It had been on his lips, that wacky song his first companion made up hundreds of years ago. No time to play, must save the day, around the world and far away. Dah dah dee dee, something about bananas and hats.
“I think your song must end soon.”
Suddenly he remembered where he was, and who he was with. “Meaning?” he asked.
Ood Sigma blinked several times before saying, “Every song must end.”
When he had first meet her she had said something about having left him back in Ealing a few weeks before. Ealing, Chiswisk, nearly the same neighborhood. Or maybe he had remembered it wrong, it had been nearly nine hundred years ago.
Either way there was her house, with her family inside, just like it had always been.
“I'd better get inside. They'll be worried.” But she didn't move, just stood there – in her wedding dress - looking at him.
“Best Christmas present they could have. Oh, no. I forgot...” he felt the smile that only she could bring out tug at the corners of his mouth “You hate Christmas.”
She smiled back at him and for a moment he felt like he was a boy again. “Yes, I do.”
“Even if it snows?”
She had always loved the snow.
“You could always... well... come with me.” he asked slowly.
“No.”
And just like that he's lost her again. Lost her for the second time.
“What?!”
It was just too much to take in. He had just – just – lost Rose, now standing here in the TARDIS was a woman in a wedding dress.
“What?!”
A red haired woman in a wedding dress.
“What?!”
The red haired woman who had never put on a wedding dress for him.
“What?!”
He knew that it would end like this. That one day he would lose her to time.
Time.
He was a Time Lord, he saw everything that was and everything that could be, but he couldn't stop her from growing old.
“I can hear you thinking.” she said softly. “There's nothing you can do. Silly Martian, you may call yourself the Doctor, but you can't fix everything.”
“But what's the fun if I don't try?”
He held her hand and lost her for the first time.
He had always had a secret longing to visit Earth, now here he was. Japan in the early part of the 21st century. It was everything his boyhood dreams had conjured: cities teaming with neon colored nightlife, countrysides filled with flowers and ancient temples, women dressed in hundred year old garb speaking on cell phones smaller then their hands. History and technology mixed together in a glorious dance.
Then there was the woman.
Obviously a traveler, you didn't get hair that bright or skin that pale in the general genetic makeup of this area of the planet.
“Excuse me,” he said, “but have you ever been a wanderer in the fourth dimension?”
It was a silly question to ask, but there was an air about her that said she had seen things no one else could even guess at.
“Oh,” she looked surprised and for a moment he thought she might just turn away and ignore him. “You’re a Martian too.” she said after studying him “I don’t have some sort of time-energy sticking to me, do I?”
The frankness of the statement made him laugh. “What's your name, young lady?”
“Donna Noble.” She said as the most becoming blush spread over her cheeks.
He bent over her hand, “It's a pleasure to meet you, Donna. I'm the Doctor.”
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Reaction!
Date: 2009-07-19 08:00 pm (UTC)Things I especially like:
--The back to front sequence of events. Non-linear narratives (or linear-but-reversed ones like this) are one of my favorite fiction tricks :)
--The adaption of the original plot to fit in with S4 canon! I wrote the original commentfic long before Journey's End--before S4 actually--and so of course it had been jossed once S4 actually started up. I like how you made it work with canon, with the bits from The Doctor's Daughter and Planet of the Ood and all.
--Related to the above, by making this work with canon you found a way to... well, if not exactly fix Donna's head, then at least give her a life of awesome adventures post-Journey's End. THIS MAKES ME VERY HAPPY. Journey's End was probably the most kick-you-in-the-teeth of all of RTD's downer endings, though of course there's some stiff competition out there. (ETA: Even after COE it's still one of the most kick-you-in-the-teeth, anyway.)
Re: Reaction!
Date: 2009-07-26 06:58 pm (UTC)YEY!!!!!!
::runs around the room in glee::
One of the cool things I liked about Donna was that she wasn't paired up with the Doctor in canon. But after reading your stories I can totally see something happening with a different regeneration.
Even after COE it's still one of the most kick-you-in-the-teeth
Absolutely. With Ianto - poor Ianto - he had been out there being awesome. but Donna had just found out how awesome she could be, then it was ripped away from her.
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Date: 2009-07-19 08:11 pm (UTC)“Donna Noble.” She said as the most becoming blush spread over her cheeks.
This should actually be:
“Donna Noble,” she said as the most becoming blush spread over her cheeks.
And there are some misplaced periods and commas scattered all over the fic.
I'm not saying this to be mean! I love what you've done with this fic. I didn't even notice the errors until my second reading. But, well, I do some modding at Teaspoon And An Open Mind and one of the results of that is that I notice things like this all the time. I really like this fic and I would love it if you put it on Teaspoon after the big reveal, but as it stands right now we wouldn't let it through the Queue, because of all the punctuation errors. And that sucks, because this fic is great.
(I do hope I haven't pissed you off. If I have, just delete this comment and think nothing of it.)
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