This is utterly fabulous. I love what you've done with the original story here -- retold and reframed it -- and the structure of this is awesome, the way we see Geoffrey telling it in bits and pieces to Anna and to Ellen and to Frank and Cyril (all of whom I adore, and all of whom you've written beautifully here.) And the last line! Oh, the last line. &hearts!
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Date: 2009-07-20 11:22 pm (UTC)