What a wonderful remix. I remember the original from femgenficathon and thought it was sad but peaceful. You made the chaos feel numbing, and how you wrote it really resonated. It's so sad. The line, "She has carefully built her life, her thoughts, her habits, around the absence of everything before." made my heart clench. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2009-07-26 12:17 pm (UTC)