ASLDKJSGKJAGJ KEITA. awwwww, god i felt so bad for Keita through this whole thing. But i loved the POV switch, how at first Keita is so excited, but then eventually he's just tired and misses Ryuichi and Ryohei, and he doesn't really understand that they're missing him just as much.
and his little snatches of what the other two were doing were all so cute, especially when they're singing together and tangled up in bed together, but the whole time I was just like "AWW KEITA" sadface.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and I'm glad you picked a w-inds. fic since there hasn't been any new fic in the fandom in ages. Thanks so much!
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Date: 2009-07-20 12:12 am (UTC)and his little snatches of what the other two were doing were all so cute, especially when they're singing together and tangled up in bed together, but the whole time I was just like "AWW KEITA" sadface.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and I'm glad you picked a w-inds. fic since there hasn't been any new fic in the fandom in ages. Thanks so much!