As others have said, doing this from the therapist's POV was perfect. The way she (you) described both their physical appearances and interactions was wonderful. It was painful to read the doggedly cheerful Dora and the resigned/haggard Remus, and that matched very much my impressions of the books. I do love that you added in some tender moments, because even although we never see them in canon, I can't imagine they didn't exist. And the way you described Sirius--the gigantic elephant in the room--was just right. Well done!
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Date: 2009-07-28 05:54 am (UTC)