YES. I love it, how you put colors and descriptions into words, a possible beginning to a young relationship. I love how playful it is, but also filled with hurt and darkness. I especially love how you wrote it first from gray and anonymous to bright colors, a sharp contrast to penknife's original fic. This is gorgeous. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 2009-07-20 01:28 pm (UTC)