This is lyrical and gorgeous. I love the way the metaphors build and build, and all the little background details come together, and everything fits. And I love the way you handle the ways all three of them--Donna, Martha, Jack--have changed since travelling with the Doctor. And I love the way you use language, and I love the way you face the ethical dilemmas the Doctor leaves in his wake without flinching.
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Date: 2009-07-19 10:12 pm (UTC)This is lyrical and gorgeous. I love the way the metaphors build and build, and all the little background details come together, and everything fits. And I love the way you handle the ways all three of them--Donna, Martha, Jack--have changed since travelling with the Doctor. And I love the way you use language, and I love the way you face the ethical dilemmas the Doctor leaves in his wake without flinching.