Hi, remixer! This is really amazing. I love how much you've added to it, the details that make this come alive.
Your Martha is so lovely, and your Donna is fantastic. I love how we get to see so much more from Martha's perspective, and how utterly heartbreaking it is to actually get that perspective. The whole thing with the UNIT politics and what Donna means and the coming invasion and everything wasn't part of my original conception for this story, but it fits so well and so naturally.
I love what you did with the chronology, the shifts back and forth. I love the amount of Martha backstory you give us, how vivid it is. I especially love love love love that last scene, the way you tie the ending back into the beginning.
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Date: 2009-07-19 08:40 pm (UTC)Your Martha is so lovely, and your Donna is fantastic. I love how we get to see so much more from Martha's perspective, and how utterly heartbreaking it is to actually get that perspective. The whole thing with the UNIT politics and what Donna means and the coming invasion and everything wasn't part of my original conception for this story, but it fits so well and so naturally.
I love what you did with the chronology, the shifts back and forth. I love the amount of Martha backstory you give us, how vivid it is. I especially love love love love that last scene, the way you tie the ending back into the beginning.
Awesome. Just really freaking awesome.