Riadne got his powers from knowing the universe; from peeking under her skirt and watching her work. She was made of crystal and light and metal and absence. His hands worked their magic and she gave herself to him, gave him her secrets so he could make her bend and sway and recreate herself.
Oh. Oh, wow. This is utterly gorgeous.
I love the original story you're working with here, and I love what you've done with the remix -- this fits the tone of the original but takes it even further, and I love the stories inside the stories. Really beautiful.
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Date: 2009-07-19 10:15 pm (UTC)Oh. Oh, wow. This is utterly gorgeous.
I love the original story you're working with here, and I love what you've done with the remix -- this fits the tone of the original but takes it even further, and I love the stories inside the stories. Really beautiful.