I know I'm late offering praise, but I love your work here. Very tight dialogue (it sounds just like an episode to me), and some lovely interior monologue moments that never felt over-the-top or sappy. Especially nice use of caitn's story, filling out the dialogue, returning to the idea of the dare, etc.
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Date: 2010-03-08 09:26 pm (UTC)Good stuff!