This was really interesting. I hadn't read the original, so at first I was completely confused by this remix but now that I know how the original went, I really like what you've done with it. I like how your exploration of the domestic AU still keeps that haunting feeling that things aren't quite right.
There are so many adorable bits: how Mohinder laughs at Gabriel's awkwardness with people; Gabriel eating the raspberries and thinking about power.
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There are so many adorable bits: how Mohinder laughs at Gabriel's awkwardness with people; Gabriel eating the raspberries and thinking about power.
Really nicely done.