Oh, this is bee-yoo-ti-ful. It's a gorgeous story, and so desperately right for the canon - and I love what you've done with the remix! The handling of the original story, told again to all the other characters (and I love your Anna, especially... though I always love Anna, so). And the vision of Geoffrey as the Taming of the Shrew - Darren would have, too.

Before he goes home to Ellen, Geoffrey turns a cartwheel on the stage, and fills the theatre's empty space with fury, ecstasy and one revolution.

And this line is just wonderful. "and one revolution", indeed.