ext_25906 ([identity profile] joe-pike-junior.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux09 2009-07-27 02:25 pm (UTC)

Thank you. I could have made the first two sections more my own (especially since I didn't change the timeline), as you said. They were more "fun" -- pranks, shenanigans, etc, but the situation got sad without being overly emotional in the last couple of sections. There wasn't much emotion in the piece, the descriptions, but the characters were still feeling it -- and that depth of feeling-without-telling could have been extended to the entire remix.

[livejournal.com profile] deelaundry's fic was very dispassionate, and I liked that. She didn't fill in the gaps to show what the characters were thinking or feeling, and I wanted the emotional pull to be the same -- as if we don't need to be told what House and Wilson are feeling.

:D Your review, it made me think!

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