ext_7666 ([identity profile] hannahrorlove.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux09 2009-07-29 01:47 am (UTC)

I love the sense of confinement in this - living in the same old house, the inability to verbalize inner thoughts - and how that breaks in the last two sections, when they finally run out to sea. It's a really nice way to show what water means to both James and Peter, and also to communicate the characters' desire to break free of their present lives.

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