This was beautiful. I really enjoyed a muggle perspective on Remus and Tonks. What a sad fic, but the sparks of comedy were much appreciated and made it not as much of a downer - I liked the idea of Tonks as a muggle cop, LOL. I liked the slow reveal of how the odds are so against them, not only do we know they are going to die, Remus is very ill, Andromeda is trying to sabotage their relationship, Remus loved Sirius for years and is still grieving for him, and he used to babysit Tonks... LOL, so inappropriate.

I really liked your OC. She came alive for me, and I had a lot of sympathy for her and her struggle to remain professional. I liked how hard she was on herself for associating homosexuality and HIV.