ext_58236 ([identity profile] antihysteric.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] remixredux09 2009-07-21 09:04 pm (UTC)

I really liked this! It's fascinating to see their relationship from the point of view of an outsider; and I love that the tone is mostly matter-of-fact because the counselor is relatively uninvested, but that some of the melancholy and (this makes no sense, I think; bear with me) what I've always thought of as the smallness of their relationship bleeds through. (Their relationship always seemed like it was barely enough for either of them, I think is what I mean, and you've captured that sort of sadness/lack while capturing some sweetness, too.) Anyway, I'm done rambling now, promise. Lovely work. :)

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