Thank you for this lovely remix! I'm sorry to be commenting so late - I was in Mexico for two weeks after the archive opened. I hope you saw my note about that and didn't think I was ignoring you or anything!

I am really bad making my feedback specific, but I did really love the way that you intensified Gaila's alien-ness, both with the Orion words and just her general perspective. And I really loved how Jim explained how humans behave when they're too drunk to make sexual decisions for themselves - what a perfect detail!

Anyway, I think remixing a story by changing the tone is really challenging, and you did an impressive job here. Thank you again!