As soon as I realized you were putting a real dragon into this remix, I laughed so hard.
I liked how you kept all the best parts of the original fic, which was a very fun, cracky story to begin, but then you wrote this story that was almost meta in the way it illustrated the difference between character development emphasis and action adventure emphasis in a game. lls_mutant's fic was about the joys of character, while yours showed the excitement of a good fight. The way everyone just fell into the fight with this perceptible "Uh, it's Tuesday? It must be fight the dragon day" spirit was totally hilarious and somehow appropriate for the poor, ragtag fleet. They've truly been through so much, even by Season 1.
Btw, I may be dense for not getting this, but who helped Cavil project the dragon? I wasn't sure if you were implying that the Final Five on board had helped create it, or Billy had, so he could be the hero, or Baltar's active imagination somehow contributed.
Also, Six's snarky running commentary was just awesome and the Kara/Lee banter was totally cute.
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I liked how you kept all the best parts of the original fic, which was a very fun, cracky story to begin, but then you wrote this story that was almost meta in the way it illustrated the difference between character development emphasis and action adventure emphasis in a game.
Btw, I may be dense for not getting this, but who helped Cavil project the dragon? I wasn't sure if you were implying that the Final Five on board had helped create it, or Billy had, so he could be the hero, or Baltar's active imagination somehow contributed.
Also, Six's snarky running commentary was just awesome and the Kara/Lee banter was totally cute.