I love both fics - the original really gets the feel of an ordinary D&D session across (how no one can ever stay on topic and it inevitably derails into a discussion about orc sex), whereas this one shows how sometimes, a well-played scene *can* be magic. Also, I like how in the original, Six is very clearly only in Baltar's head, whereas here I at first thought she was Caprica, that is, really there.